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I see a wave
crashing down on me
Would it be fine
if I let myself drown
in the sea of time?

It's so nice to see the sunset
don't you think?
Colors reflecting on the water
The sky is red and so is the blood
in my veins, in your veins
like the color of fire when it burns

I see a moment
stretching into infinity
Would it be alright
if I hold on to your hand
through all the dark times?

I am but a little castle
made of sand
Slowly destroyed by the water
The sea is blue and so are your eyes
Do you know how it feels
to be trapped in those eyes of yours?

I see a wave
crashing down on us
I never thought
you would go this far
Thank you
Thank you
©2006-2009 ~diablong-buang
:icondiablong-buang:

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The rising tide...

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:iconslim-beatnik:
Intense, especially the end.
I like it!

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Neque porro quisquam est qui dolorem ipsum quia dolor sit amet, consectetur, adipisci velit...
There is no one who loves pain itself, who seeks after it and wants to have it, simply because it is pain...
~Poetic-Disturbance a little club I'm in.
:icondiablong-buang:
thanks :D

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Don't look ahead, just run to me
Each step will find the next one, recklessly
We'll find ourselves on the safest ledge
Well pardon me, I couldn't help myself
-- Copeland - On the Safest Ledge --

*Letters-Words-Write ~writeaway
:iconslim-beatnik:
Yeah.

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Neque porro quisquam est qui dolorem ipsum quia dolor sit amet, consectetur, adipisci velit...
There is no one who loves pain itself, who seeks after it and wants to have it, simply because it is pain...
~Poetic-Disturbance a little club I'm in.
:icondiablong-buang:
wow thanks sa fave! :D

--
Don't look ahead, just run to me
Each step will find the next one, recklessly
We'll find ourselves on the safest ledge
Well pardon me, I couldn't help myself
-- Copeland - On the Safest Ledge --

*Letters-Words-Write ~writeaway
:iconbayen:
great imagery...pinoy writing rocks!

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The Freudian Slip
Macellarius Est
If opinions can be lethal, then I am a murderer.
:icondiablong-buang:
why, thanks...

you're pinoy???!!

--
Don't look ahead, just run to me
Each step will find the next one, recklessly
We'll find ourselves on the safest ledge
Well pardon me, I couldn't help myself
-- Copeland - On the Safest Ledge --

*Letters-Words-Write ~writeaway

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